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| Jim Brass"So you won't be leaving just yet, Gil" csinut |
| Grissom sighed heavily as he rubbed a hand over his tired face "No, looks that way" pause "I need to make a call, can you call the coroner for me Jim?" gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| "Sure". Do you want me to wait until David gets here? sarauk56 |
| "Yeah, i'm just gonna go to the denali and make my call" sighs, closes his kit and stands up "looks like double and triple shifts until we have this latest sicko behind bars" he walks off towards the vehicle shouting over his shoulder "I'll call the rest of the team out too". Brass flips open his cell and hits speed dial #1 for the coroners office. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Grissom starts the engine to the denali and turns on the AC to escape the hot Vegas sun. He reaches for his cell phone to call the rest of his team and notices he has 1 missed call. His heart starts to race as he realizes the missed call was from Sara. He starts to dial her number when suddenly his phone begins to ring. wagmel |
| Seeing the unknown number displayed on his screen, Grissom tentatively answers with his usual business tone "Gissom", "Yeah Raymond Langston, did you manage to find anything from Haskell's details?", "As a matter of fact yes, a skeleton that has been buried for some years and a male body with eleven stab wounds" Grissom replied. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| A blip heard across Raymond's reply alerted Grissom to another call. His heart skipped a beat as he hoped it would be Sara attempting another contact. "I-I-I'll, uh, have to call you right back," Gil's voice choked out as he felt as if his anxiety was stifling his ability to breathe. Without waiting for a response, he ended the call with an animated click before switching to the party his call waiting had kept connected. "Grissom," was all he could weakly force out. MyKate |
| "Dr Gilbert Grissom?" a deep male English voice responded in question. "Yes! Speaking" Grissom replied a little testily. "Ah, at last. Hello I'm Dr Spencer Frost, a fellow entomologist, who has been trying to reach you on behalf of the International Entomology Research and study foundation" Dr Frost replied tentatively. "Oh and why's that may I ask?" Grissom replied nonplussed. He was always getting these sort of calls, and quite frankly he just wanted to end the call in case Sara called again. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| "Dr. Grissom, I'll get right to the point. Your latest monograph on the correlation of environmental pollution to colony collapse disorder among Hymenoptera has the research community here humming...if you'll pardon the pun," the casual tone of the elder man's words easing some of Grissom's irritation. With a short chuckle at the insider's joke, Gil responded easily, "Thanks, but it was just a ramble of documentations and observations - truly not worthy of much recognition," referring to his past scholarly postings that had earned him the elevated status he currently enjoyed in this branch of academia. MyKate |
| "Well be that as it may, you probably also keep up with the latest entomological news too, so I'll get down to what I'm calling about. There are 3 new neotropical flower flies 'Diptera: Syrphidae that have been discovered in Costa Rica recently, and it's an exciting find by one of our colleagues. Problem is we have no one of the calibre needed to research them free for the next six months, they're all taken up with other research committments. So basically we need some one sooner rather than later, to get right on with the study of them" Spencer cleared his throat slightly before adding "Is there any possibility at all Dr Grissom, that you could undertake this research in the next month or so?" he said crossing his fingers, it would be a major plus to get the famous Dr Grissom on board this project. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Not wanting to appear rude.. Grissom sighed.. "Look Dr. Frost , Could I get back to you,I'm at a crime scene right now, and I'm unable to discuss this with you at the moment...... [sarauk56] |
| In truth, on any other given day, the possibility of doing field research in a rainforest area would send Gil's heart racing. Today, however, his heart was totally focused on the hope of a pretty brunette trying once more to contact him. "Yes, yes of course. Perhaps you'd like me to forward you the proposed perspectus for your review? Although time is of the essence, a few days would give you the opportunity to decide. We could make all the travel arrangements, visas, etc." Frost added hastily, hoping to make the proposition hard to resist. Just then, a beep crossed the airwaves causing Gil to almost drop the device. MyKate |
| Acting quickly Grissom spoke"Okay please do that. I'm terribly sorry but i really must go now, i have an incoming call i need to answer. Goodbye" he said disconnecting the call right away without speaking further, or giving the man a chance to reply. Flicking his thumb quickly to the button to answer the other call with a much softer "Hey, I've been trying to get in touch with you" after he saw who the call was from on the caller display. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| The sound of his voice momentarily erased the tiredness that had threatened to overwhelm her as it did her last few weeks as an active CSI. Her hectic schedule of the last few weeks had been intensified by the rush to conclude their research in this tropical island rainforest before the approaching tropical storm erased the habitat of the endangered species of wildlife they were studying. MyKate |
| "Hi, this is gonna have to be quick..I'm sorry Gil looks like we'll be out of touch for a while.. nothing to worry about" she hastened to add.."It's just we've a tropical storm heading our way and communication is the first to go" she laughed a little unsteadily "Robert assures me we'll be safe..as happy as clams in a clam bed" the snort of genuine amusement that accompanied this made him smile and he almost missed her next words.."..I told him the only "gill" I was interested in having was you.."her voice had dropped to that smokey tone and his heart flipped over."Sorry I'm babbling.." "Sara" he said.. berniej |
| The connection started to crackle and cut out "Sara!.....You still there? Sara? Honey can you hear me" Gil called out raising his voice. A broken "Gil...Yeah I'm still here, but for how much longer i don't know..." came across the line in usual intimate tone with him "They're trying to work on the telecommunication and internet connection stuff, to secure them better before the storm hits" Sara said explaining the cell line disruption. "Honey, we think we have a complicated serial case on our hands at the lab. I'm not going to......." Gil's voice trailed off as he heard the phone connection signal a dead tone, indicating the line was now dead. "Danmed!" Gil said looking at the now blank screen, before flipping it closed and throwing it angrily on to his dashboard, and sighing heavily. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| He pinched the bridge of his nose tightly, fighting the pressure building behind his eyes that usually triggered the onset of a migraine. I've got to focus on breathing - slowly in, slowly out - he thought, a slight smile forming as he remembered how Sara would hold his hand while she'd coach him into the relaxing relief from the mind-numbing pain. He recalled how she had searched the Internet for hours while he suffered during one particularly disabling episode. His thoughts continued to ramble over that image of her triumphant smile which he'd caught as he winced painfully when the bedroom door opened admitting the brief harshness of afternoon sunlight. If Sara were here, she'd massage my neck and work out these tension knots...she'd make it better...With a sigh, his head drooped mournfully. She'd make it all better... MyKate |
| A tap tap on the glass had him lifting his head "They're waiting for you.." Brass watched him noting the strain around his eyes, the lack of sleep "You okay?" he asked "Yeah" he got out of the car slowly"Bit of a headache" he added as he headed out, slanting him a wry grin "You coming?" Silently marvelling that he had actually admitted to a headache Brass caught up with him..just when thought he had him all figured out he threw him a curve ball.. David had arrived and after a brief look they had agreed to send it back to the morgue for Al to further examine,Grissom accompanied the body , leaving Nick in charge of the collecting of evidence at the scene...it was going to be a long day.. Berniej |
| Walking into the morgue followed by Catherine, Gil could already see Al had carried out most of the autopsy with Gerald Tolivers (I might be wrong with this vic/suspect) chest cavity cracked wide open . "You got a COD for us Al?" Gil asked without greeting, eager to get on with the case at hand. "Catherine, Gil" Al addressed them both picking up a small boken bone to show them "Broken hyoid bone, classic starangulation. The ten deep penatrative stab wounds as you suspected were postmortem, no bleeding occured" Al said putting the bone back down again "I hear your not leaving us quite just yet Gil" he said with a smirk in the entomologists direction. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Grissom's head snapped up to pin the doctor with stare. Squaring his shoulders, he leaned over the body asking tersely, "Anything else?" His body language was screaming "Let's just get this over with". Al chanced a glance in Catherine's direction. Her eyes darted towards Grissom and then back to the doctor, her eyebrows raised in silent confusion. MyKate |
| It had been wonderful to hear his voice.Leaving the makeshift communication centre Sara's mind flew back to the message she'd received just a few days ago...one simple line... 'I'm not ready to say goodbye'..she'd cried like a baby. Now it seemed between the weather and his work they would be out of touch a little longer. Glad she had so much to do in preparation of the storm,she buried the voice in the back of her head 'it's just another excuse, you know that, once this is done there'll be another' she shut it down fiercely,but was afraid..they hadn't caught Natalie for 9 months. Late that night falling into an exhausted sleep Sara dreamt of Vegas..Grissom was counting dummies from the roof,she stood, a smile on her face watching as he turned and grinning took a few steps towards her, but more dummies fell separating them. Then he was rushing among them, jar in one hand tweezers in the other, rain falling in torrents, "Did you see him?. wasn't he fast?.. If I catch him no one will ever be Roach champion again" She woke to absolute silence..."The storms here" Roberts voice came from across the room. Berniej |
| A lone escaped tear fell from her eye, as the last vestiges of her dream faded and she came back to reality, rubbing her eyes, hiding the evidence and sitting up, she spoke in a low still sleep laden voice "Thank you Rob. I'm getting up now and i'll help secure any last minute things that need doing around here" Sara said, then let out a long labored sigh as she threw back the covers and swung her legs out of the bed. "No rush. Take your time, and make sure you eat breakfast today Sara" Robert said with a pointed look at her, he along with some of the others on the trip had noticed her poor apetite and eating habits, enough to cause concern. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Sirens screamed as squad cars raced past him on the way to another scene, but Grissom barely acknowledged them as he gripped the wheel tighter. Distracted by the maelstrom of his thoughts, Gil was on his way to meet Nick who had uncovered another possible lead to their current case. I'm not ready to say goodbye. The road became out of focus as he recalled the comfort he had taken when Sara had first spoken to him that night after receiving the good news about Brass's improved prognosis. I'm not ready to say goodbye. His thoughts moved to the night he had sent that reply to her emailed video. Having sat alone for what had felt like mere minutes when the clock had actually continued to move past hours, Grissom had felt himself sink into the depth of despair as he watched Sara, his Sara, speak those heartbreaking words: Maybe its better this way...maybe it's definitely better this way... Reviewing that loop of the message for what seemed like the thousandth time, something snapped inside him. Kicking his chair out furiously behind him, he had only taken two paces before his eyes fell upon the case files sitting on the edge of the desk. Work...for years, it was my life...and she understood...Sara always understood...and somehow, she was content to see herself as the second most important thing in my life... His anger boiled over, his hands flinging the files across the room, his tears bursting forth as his knees buckled beneath him. Gil Grissom, tower of strength, whose life was suddenly reduced to a pile of worthless rubble, was alone. His tired eyes looked upwards at the frozen frame displayed on his computer's monitor. Sara...I'm sorry you never knew...you were always the most important thing in my life...I'm nothing without you...and I'm not ready to say goodbye...The blare from the impatient teen driver behind him signaled the change in the traffic light. MyKate |
| Forcing his mind back to the present and the case, he eased the car forward,his brain mentally going over all the evidence they had collected to date..he could see Dr. Langston definitely wanted to be involved and a quick call to the sheriff had made it possible for him to be brought on board..Grissom felt an affinity for the man, yet had no real reason why..'maybe' the thought danced in his head ' Dr. Langston would be interested in a more permanent move to CSI?'. Shutting off his thoughts once again he pulled up behind Nick, getting out of the car and putting on the straw hat that had so amused them all the first time he wore it, he crossed over to the waiting man "What you got Nick?" berniej |
| Grissom said as he walked up to the make shift mortuary tarped and taped off area at the scene he'd been at only a couple of hours previously "Al" he greeted as he came to a halt in front of a table that held various items of collected evidence. "Apart from the body that's now back at the lab, and off course this" Nick said indicating to another table that held the newly dug up laid out skeleton "We don't have very much apart from some leads that Brass is following up on as we speak. But there's still the body to process yet" Nick concluded. Just then a squad car pulled up near the scene which caught Grissom's attention making him turn to see Dr Langston exit out of the car. Al looked up at the man approaching, then at his friend "So i see you called in a little extra help on this one Gil" he said with a slight smirk. Getting the introductions quickly out of the way, Grissom looked to his CSI. Nick stated that he was now going back to the lab with some of the evidence to process anthing that could give them a possible further lead. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Meanwhile, evacuation efforts were underway as the research team scrambled to pack their sensitive equipment onto the transport vehicles that would take them to the Sea Shepard and away from the danger of the approaching storm. Sara had just brought the last parcel from her lab and was turning back towards their makeshift lab to help her colleagues when Robert appeared in front of her, grabbing her by the shoulders. "We have to leave now, Sara," he yelled over the gust of wind and the pounding of the rain caused by the outer bands of the disturbance heading directly over their area. "The files-" Sara started to protest, stress evident as she matched his tone. Robert's hands slid down to her upper arms, his grip accenting the urgency of his appeal. Shaking his head, he interrupted her saying, "We need to leave now, Sara. The transport trucks are taking us inland to the Reserve. It should take us about two days to reach it in this weather, if the roads remain passable." They stood in the rain for another brief moment. Sara, processing these latest developments, stood lost in thought, concerned about Gil's worry for her as she remained unable to contact him. Robert was also lost in thought, reveling in the feel of Sara in his grasp. It was becoming harder to struggle with his growing attraction to her. His eyes roved undetected for the briefest of moments as she stood a heartbeat away from him, soaked through to her skin in the unending assault of the warm precipitation. MyKate |
| "I guess that means now" Sara said with a sudden grin,with a long suffering sigh Robert nodded and urging her ahead of him they dashed out to the waiting truck."Hey your all wet Sara!" Judy one of the younger volunteer's teased.."Did you smell that bad..or are you trying to tell us there will be no more showers for a while ?" "Ah, that would be no, there won't be any showers for a while or laundry facilities" she gave a shrug as she sat purposely next to Judy transferring as much water as possible causing laughter all around "I'm conserving water and showering in my clothes" More laughter greeted this and Robert found himself wishing that whoever the guy was that made her so happy or so miserable would just stay away and leave her alone ..perhaps there would never have been a chance for him ,for them, but since the weird one line message had come Sara was balancing between utter joy and dark depression..he'd have a few words to say to the guy if they ever chanced to meet. bernij |
| Meanwhile, now back at the lab, Grissom fought to overcome the tiredness that threatened to overtake him... sarauk56 |
| He and Catherine were sat in one of the labs still frustratingly trying to get an ID on the soup to go decomp victim, he'd investigated in the quiet, idealic setting. The one he'd attended a little while earlier, that had brought him a strong yearning of wanting to be somewhere else, far away from the harsh crimes and death of Vegas, holed up in some basic research facility with the one the person who he hoped was going to be his future. "You still with me?" Catherine asked him with a soft friendly smile. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| Grissom blinked... Trying to concentrate,his thoughts still on Sara's call........ "I'm sorry Catherine, where were we?"... Catherine gave Grissoms arm a squeeze.."Gill go home, get some rest,you've already worked a triple..I'll give you a call if anything turns up"..... sarauk56 |
| He bit back an instinctive refusal,knowing he was tired ,way too tired,..plus Hank had probably forgotten he even had an owner,sighing he nodded once"Your right,I'll head out" turning at the door he added"Make sure the rest of the guys take a break...we all need to be on top form for this one.." "Don't worry Gill we'll get you there..I promise" with a knowing smile she enjoyed the blank faced look,it wasn't often she could get one over on Grissom. Refusing to acknowledge her comment he headed home hoping to get some much needed sleep..and just possibly place a call to Sara the last call had been interrupted so abruptly he needed to know she was safe and assure her it was a temporary setback ..he had every intention of being with her as soon as humanely possible..the calm he'd felt when he finally accepted his need to go was beginning to unravel,,he needed to see her,like a physical ache in his heart. berniej |
| On the drive home Catherine had called to inform him soup man had now been identified as Gerald Toliver, and that Nick and Greg were on there way over to the mans residence with a warrant They had also established the ID on the skeletal victim as the first victim of Haskell, as Joel Stiener. The male DB with the trade mark stab wounds was identified as Mr Masters, who's wife Maureen was currently listed as missing, and probably with the accomplice of Haskell's. Knowing he'd only manage to get himself a short nap, a quick shower, grab a bite to eat, and try to call Sara again, before heading back to the lab, Grissom increased the pressure on the accelaerator peddle to get home and done a bit quicker. The call to Sara was his number one priority as he entered their home, dropping his things absently onto the coffee table, he picked up the cordless telephone to make the call on the land line. gsrbritfan/RubixCSIpuzzle |
| A cheerful voice informed him that they were unable to connect his call and to try again later. fighting down the instinct to throw the phone he decided in favor of at least trying to sleep..he was asleep as soon as he lay down..his dreams a confusing mix of Haskell and Sara and Dr. Langston all trying to call him at once and arguing over who should be first. He woke blinking to clear his sleep filled eyes and peering at his watch collapsed back with a groan, he'd only managed two hours of sleep..his body was still desperately tired but his mind felt razor sharp and as he stumbled from the bed and stood under the hot shower he realized what his dream had been telling him..just how Haskell was communicating with his accomplice. A quick call to the dog sitter to apologise and he was ready to get back to work. He glanced at his lap top but really didn't have the time, making a conscious decision to call Sara at the next available opportunity he headed back to the lab..hoping to catch Dr. Langston, they would need his help for this. berniej |
| The rain continued to pelt the canvas-covered transport vehicle as it dodged the widening rivulets of mud which were now threatening to erode the only safe travel path through this tropical quadrant. The mood of the occupants was darkening in tandem to the skies. After their initial exchanges of good-natured teasing and gaiety died down, these scientists became increasingly concerned about the unrelenting storm. Robert's weather radio continued to broadcast coastal weather updates, and the latest was far from encouraging. There were murmured exchanges and wary looks among most of the passengers, but Robert was not aware of them. For some time since they had boarded, he found himself fixated on Sara. He had tried to gain control of his thoughts, closing his eyes to redirect his focus. Upon opening them moments later , however, his heart sank as he watched her arms wrapped around herself - unquestionably in protective mode. He fought against this instincts, denying himself the pleasure of feeling his arms wrapped around her for the second time today. Quickly he closed his eyes and leaned back against the tarp-covered sidewall, reining in his desire that had been released by their first brief physical contact. His eyes flew opened seconds later, however, as his ears recorded the sickening crack. While his body was thrown off-balance, his arms instinctively reached out as he called frantically, "Sara!" MyKate |
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